Writing Globally Part 1: Theory

This is the first in a two-part series on teaching writing for a globalized audience. Find the second part here.


At the start of every class, I like to give my students a short writing prompt to answer. These little assignments aren’t for any points beyond participation, and they’re very open to interpretation by the students. I write so many of these prompts, sometimes I forget to actually anticipate the answers. I do not think any student of mine has every given a “wrong” answer for these writing activity, but they do give some interesting responses. 

Usually the prompts tangentially related to whatever project we’re working on: during the rhetorical analysis, I might post an ad and ask what the rhetorical situation might be, or during the collaborative research project, I might ask each group to write an argument for a day off in one sentence without talking to each other. However, some classes fall on days between projects, or I’ve just run out of ideas for a certain project, so I give the class some easy prompt and ask everyone to share as a pleasant way of starting the day. One prompt was “How’s it going?” because it was during midterms, and I wanted to give them the chance to vent about how cruel and merciless a leader I am right before I gave them their real midterm course evaluations. From this prompt, I expected a few rants about the .001% extra credit I had offered so far, or maybe just a brief “it’s fine,” but that expectation made the assumption that everyone had interpreted the question the same way. In that class, 1 student was from China, 1 from Kuwait, and 2 were from Saudi Arabia. The student from Kuwait and 1 student from Saudi Arabia provided the expected answers: apparently, they were doing alright, a little tired though. However, the student from China and the other student from Saudi Arabia both mentioned that they hadn’t quite understood the question and instead took it as an opportunity to tell the class how very specific things in their lives were going. One student was having car trouble, and the other had just seen a good movie. Neither answer was wrong or even far from what I expected as answers, but both represented students interpreting a seemingly-neutral prompt through their own cultural and linguistic lenses and understanding it differently.

Not exactly what happened to him, but it was exciting to hear something different

When I first started talking to my students about analyzing blogs, one thing we went over was understanding the audience for those blogs. I used a lot of examples from travel blogs, so the audience we came up with were people who enjoyed traveling, people who wanted to travel but couldn’t, or people making plans to travel. We broke those audiences down a bit more to what would appeal to each of them, but at no point did anyone say anything like “well, the audience is Americans because the blog is in English.” And I’m glad nobody said that for two reasons. One, I didn’t want to be the one to point out that English is spoken in more places than the United States. Two, I didn’t want to tell that student they were wrong to assume that English would only appeal to people who speak it as a first language because there are many, many things that don’t appeal to me that are written in English.

There is no standard way of communicating to an audience based on where they’re from. There’s is no universally effective way to communicate despite the daydreams of Human Resource departments everywhere. In “Globalization and the Teaching of ‘Communication skills,’” Deborah Cameron writes that “promoting particular interactional norms, genres and speech-styles across languages, on the grounds that they arc maximally ‘effective’ for purposes of ‘communication.’” Arguing that communication can be standardized based on what forms of communication are most effective for every audience is reductive and assigns primacy to a certain type of communication based on the nebulous concept that any one way of communicating is more effective.

A hand-written list ranking the most universally effective ways of communicating

Cameron points out that any language teaching “both requires and contributes to the process of language standardization.” By telling students that one way of communicating is more effective than another, we are functionally standardizing language. However, if we think back to my international students who answered “How’s it going” differently than expected, we can get some insight into what could be done to mitigate some of the standardizing effects of language teaching. Cameron writes that “institutionalizing some people’s preferred practices as norms will be to define large numbers of other people as inadequate or ‘substandard’ communicators,” or, by arguing that one way of communicating is more effective, anyone communicating differently is suddenly able to be perceived as an ineffective communicator. However, in teaching students to write for a global audience, we don’t have to tell them to communicate in a rote way that fits everyone of a certain nationality or geography. Instead, I think we should teach them that universally effective communication does not exist and, instead of trying to write from some mythical neutral perspective, they should be aware of how their language will be interpreted, will they be understood as they intended, and what can they do to control how the audience understands their language.

5 Replies to “Writing Globally Part 1: Theory”

  1. Hello Justin! We’re almost done! The end is near! Feel free to take or leave my feedback. I just want to help you consider possible changes to make your editing process easier.

    1. You could revise your first paragraph to give it more of a hook. You started with a story, which was good, but just for me personally it was a slow takeoff. Maybe frame it with more dialogue or as more of a story – or possibly outline the circumstances first.

    2. The 3rd paragraph is very confusing to me because there are so many vague terms like ‘someone’ and ‘something’. It might be helpful to offer some examples or reorganize it a little bit.

    (feedback continued on Part 2)
    ~Christopher Palasz (part 1)

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  2. Justin,

    When you write that that there is “no right way to talk to someone, just like there’s no wrong way,” you cast a much wider net than you might possibly imagine. At least in my world, if I told my mother to ––bleep–– off that would be a no-doubt-about-it wrong way to talk to her. If someone wrote a blog referring to me with racial slurs, that would be a wrong way to talk to me. When the Josh Dawsey, of the Washington Post, reported that President Donald Trump had referred to Haiti, El Salvador, and African countries as “shithole” countries the majority of the world (or, at the least, in my circles) unanimously criticized him for saying the wrong thing. I am pretty sure from the examples you gave of English speech you don’t agree with, that you are not advocating President Trump’s way of expression as being okay. When we say something is not wrong, we are basically saying it is okay.

    On the other hand, there is a right way to talk to someone. That right way is with respect, honor, and civility. My father used to tell us (his ministerial team) that if we had no respect for an individual, we should always respect his office. By this, he meant that even if we did not like a minister, or pastor, or deacon, or member, or anyone for that matter, that we should still respect the office that person has. That is why, for example, I never refer to President Trump as Mr. Trump, Donald, or any other more colorful derogatory adjectives I could come up with. I may not agree with the man, but he is the duly elected leader of our nation, and the office of the presidency requires that respect. Thus, Mr. President, President Trump, or President Donald Trump, are the only ways in which I refer to President Trump. As in, we must do all that we can to make sure President Trump does not get re-elected. Or, President Trump should be impeached.

    Now, I am going to make the leap right now to assume (Oh, what a dangerous word!) that you were referring to grammar, genre, voice, rhetoric choices, or any other of the many ways that we talk about language choices when you said “there is no right way to talk to someone, just like there’s no wrong way.” You will notice I did not say vocabulary because vocabulary choices are definitely part of the “right way”—“wrong way” paradigm I am talking about. I also did not say tone, because the tone is how we denote respect and disrespect. Words take on a different meaning depending on the tone we use. When writing this is so much more difficult to differentiate.

    I don’t know how you can make that clearer, or even if you need to… That is the difficulty sometimes in language that someone might take whatever is written the wrong way. But, could you imagine one of your students using the “N” word with someone because you taught him or her that there was no wrong way to talk to someone and then suing you and NAU for somehow being liable for their emergency room and hospital bills?
    Just one man’s thoughts. Other than that, I thought this was another one of your great blogs.
    Thanks, as always, for sharing!

    Bernabé

    Works Cited
    Dawsey, Josh. “Trump Derides Protections for Immigrants from ‘Shithole’ Countries.” Washington Post, 12 Jan. 2018. http://www.washingtonpost.com, https://www.washingtonpost.com/politics/trump-attacks-protections-for-immigrants-from-shithole-countries-in-oval-office-meeting/2018/01/11/bfc0725c-f711-11e7-91af-31ac729add94_story.html.

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  3. Hi Justin,

    I really enjoyed your narrative approach to this blog. I waited in anticipation to what it was leading up to. It was a nice way to lead into the overall discussion. Christopher pointed out the possibility of adding a hook to the end of the first paragraph, I completely agree. I fellt like you were just getting started in telling us how this applies to the overall topic, but left us hanging a little bit there.

    I was most intrigued by your right way, wrong way of talking to some discussion. I may have read it out of context or in a way that made me disagree, but coming from my background, there are certain ways to talk to someone within my community. There are also wrong ways too. Perhaps you could revisit the idea to help clarify if it turns out you did mean something different. Perhaps it’s just a difference in opinions, I’m not sure.

    On another note, your overall point was made, i think, and it made for a wonderful discussion. Your examples were rich and you included some of the concepts and text from the class readings.

    -Sunnie

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  4. Justin,

    First, a random ramble: Reading your writing is such a treat. I came to your blog to read these last posts on globalization, but the title of your previous post – “Teaching with Social Media and How Not to Get Fired” caught my attention and I had to click on it. I feel like I should use that title as an example of how to write a title for my students. It caught my eye, it made me want to read. That’s what a title should do. Also, your moose picture and caption made me literally laugh out loud. I’m still chuckling a little as I write this. With both the CRP and Persuasive Essay both in full swing, the inevitable including of whatever images they can find to meet the “2 visuals” requirement is getting a little too real. You can probably relate. Maybe I’m just delirious. But it’s so wonderful to read something that hits so close to home.

    Anyway. Back to this post.

    I enjoy how you begin, as usual, with a specific scenario. This leads the reader into your points and allows them to get a sense of what you’re focusing on. However, I don’t think that the transition between the first paragraph and the second (after the car fire image) is as clear as it could be. For me, this transition might be the time to come right out and give a statement about globalization, differing expectations, etc – what you want the reader to take out of that first example, in other words.

    Also, oh my god. The links to Atlas Shrugged and Trump’s Twitter account. Cracking up. Well done. You know how to keep an audience’s attention. As a GTA and as someone who appreciates your humor, your writing is really well tailored to your audience…or at least an audience who thinks like me.

    Thanks for your enjoyable and informative writing this semester and good luck with finishing up everything!

    –Sarahmarie

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